This was a little long for me to copy and paste to put on here. I'll try my best to reference back to specific parts of your story. One: I am envious of your grammar, spelling, and the the language devices you use in here. @: Love the magic realism/surrealism you use here. I want to steal this story from you but, i couldn't pull it off as well as you have here.
For improvement: I don't see anything wrong here.
Also, the line i love the most has to be " Pam returned to her pigtails and notecards." I don;t know why i love it as much as i do but again...I want to steal it.
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